I don't know the title of my song

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    TurtlesAreInterestingNgl / Feb 23 2021 15.24

    I written this song during lockdown March 2020-

    I hate this song out of all the ones I wrote- I just realised how depressing this song is.

    You always just walk away.

    Every time things get bad,

    It wouldn’t have worked out,

    Any way

    I thought to myself

    Why did you leave?

    But the traffic was noisy

    So you didn't hear me cry

    Baby, I don't deserve you

    I wish I could make you turn around

    We sat at a table,

    Roses and petals,

    I thought that you loved me.

    When passion’s a prison you can’t break free

    You always end up,

    Crying for me

    But I'll get back up

    I'll love myself

    You better keep it to yourself

    I'll scream the words,

    You hurt me with,

    Though you’re relying on me

    To lead you home

    Baby, you don't deserve love

    No one who wants you,

    Could want you more.

    We sat at a table,

    Roses and petals,

    I thought that you loved me.

    When passion’s a prison

    you can’t break free

    You always end up

    Crying for me,

    You always end up,

    Crying for me.

    And I'll get back up

    And I'll love myself

    Out of all the things I did,

    Loving you,

    was the worst.

    Oml- Why did I write a sad love story- I hope this is good.

    -Sage

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    Its-Inez / Feb 23 2021 17.37

    Wow-

    This is SO good. I like it way more than all of my songs. You could so write songs for a living one day...

    Maybe you could call it roses and petals??

    -Inez

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    TurtlesAreInterestingNgl / Feb 23 2021 19.19

    Thanks Inez!

    Also, I think yeah, I should call it Roses and Petals. :D

    And nO yOuR sOnGs are wayyy better, mines cringe-

    Thanks again

    -Sage

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    Its-Inez / Feb 23 2021 20.52

    Nooo. I LOVE your song!!!! I promise I wrote such a BAD one the other day. I mean, if u rlly want I can post it tomorrow but I absolutely HATE it.

    This is like some of the stuff I listen to in my free time :)

    -Inez

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    TurtlesAreInterestingNgl / Feb 24 2021 9.18

    :o What's your other one you wrote about?

    -Sage

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    DisneyFan2008 / Feb 24 2021 10.54

    Roses and Petals.

    Crying for me.

    I thought that you loved me.

    Maybe one of those three? I don't know. Your song is amazing but it made me cry!!

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    DisneyFan2008 / Feb 24 2021 10.54

    Roses and Petals.

    Crying for me.

    I thought that you loved me.

    Maybe one of those three? I don't know. Your song is amazing but it made me cry!!

    TurtlesAreInterestingNgl / Feb 24 2021 11.16

    Awh! I've stuck with Roses and Petals, but thanks for the ideas.

    I don't know whether I'd call my song amazing but Thank you. You made my day :D

    -Sage x

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    Its-Inez / Feb 23 2021 20.52

    Nooo. I LOVE your song!!!! I promise I wrote such a BAD one the other day. I mean, if u rlly want I can post it tomorrow but I absolutely HATE it.

    This is like some of the stuff I listen to in my free time :)

    -Inez

    TurtlesAreInterestingNgl / Feb 24 2021 11.27

    What's your other song about? :P

    -Sage

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    TurtlesAreInterestingNgl / Feb 24 2021 11.29

    I don't know why it posted twice ;-;

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