First 5 Poems ever! (To be continued)

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  1. Artist
    Proud-B / Jan 01 2021 19.58

    Okay so these are my first five poems I've written down and shared... Hope you like them, please say what was good about them and give constructive criticism :)

    You may think I'm ignorant

    You may think I'm cowardly

    You may think I'm unkind

    You may think I'm boring

    But as a wise person once said

    A person isn't what they are on the outside

    They're what they are on the inside

    And that's the reason they say

    Don't judge a book by it's cover

    That's true for me and you

    And everyone else

    ~Poem One

    People look in the looking glass

    But isn't that what Alice did?

    She didn't see her true self

    So why should you?

    Some look in the mirror and think they're ugly

    Others see themselves and call themself pretty

    But you only see your outside

    When that doesn't matter

    It's who you are on the inside that matters

    So don't look in the mirror and judge yourself on looks

    Because really, it's worthless

    While I guarantee only 3% will not look in the mirror

    I wish everyone the best

    ~Poem 2

    The world around myself

    And everyone else

    Is covered in darkness

    But that's not going to stop me

    The lockdowns we've had

    The lonely times

    The masks we wear

    Social distancing from friends

    I know you can relate

    But it's for the greater good

    So do your duty

    In the community

    And follow the motto

    Hands, Face, Space

    ~Poem 3

    Rolling, grumbling thunder

    Striking, bright lightning

    Rushing, loud winds

    Pouring, icy rain

    Inside, outside, both

    We think we should stay at home

    But that was during 2019

    But in 2020

    If you can go out, count yourself lucky

    Because this wasn't allowed

    During lockdown 2020

    Who'd have ever thought we wouldn't be allowed out?

    We've all learnt an important lesson

    Don't take anything for granted.

    ~ Poem 4

    You and your gang

    You think you're everything

    But you don't own everyone

    Nor does anyone own you.

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    DisneyFan2008 / Jan 03 2021 16.53

    you write wonderfully and I loved reading these poems

  3. Artist
    Temporary76556578 / Jan 06 2021 21.56

    A small rock falls

    tumbling down

    crashing and cascading

    Before i can

    turn nor shout

    you're swallowed by the earth

    you inflicted it's wrath

    Now it's come to find you

    to trap you

    to smash you

    to tear your whole world down

    but you thought for yourself

    and only yourself

    and henceforth i was alone

    Respect is what it called for

    and disregard is what you gave it

    it showed you it's power

    So i shall tremble before the power of our earth.

    I love your poems they sound amazing! i hope you like mine too!

    ~Irene

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    Temporary76556578 / Jan 06 2021 21.56

    A small rock falls

    tumbling down

    crashing and cascading

    Before i can

    turn nor shout

    you're swallowed by the earth

    you inflicted it's wrath

    Now it's come to find you

    to trap you

    to smash you

    to tear your whole world down

    but you thought for yourself

    and only yourself

    and henceforth i was alone

    Respect is what it called for

    and disregard is what you gave it

    it showed you it's power

    So i shall tremble before the power of our earth.

    I love your poems they sound amazing! i hope you like mine too!

    ~Irene

    MagicalSunset7001 / Jan 06 2021 23.16

    Just WOW!

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    MagicalSunset7001 / Jan 06 2021 23.17

    Proud-B,

    I'm not sure I believe that these are your first 5 poems ever!!!!!! They're amazing!

    Great job

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